“I bet when all the punctuation marks have a party, they quietly look at exclamation point’s wife and think, that poor woman.”
—Dana Gould, comedian
I love this quote because I don’t love the use of exclamation points. As Mark Twain said, “It’s like laughing at your own joke.” People don’t need to be told to be excited when what you are offering is inherently awesome. If “The ultimate driving machine” from BMW doesn’t rev your engine, an exclamation point isn’t going to help. If your value proposition is clear, compelling, and competitive, you don't need to shout it.
Exclamation points are everywhere in marketing. Social media posts. Home pages. Emails. Ad copy. Even straight-forward product descriptions (e.g., All natural! Gluten-free! Vegan!!!). Using exclamation points does not make your marketing more effective. In my opinion, the more you use, the less believable it is. It feels desperate and unprofessional. Like a used-car salesman in your face begging you to be interested.
Effortless, understated marketing copy is much more effective. It projects confidence, credibility, and dignity.
Nike's "Just do it." tagline is widely considered the all-time best. Three simple words followed by a period. Period. No yelling. No superficial enthusiasm. It comes across as sincere and genuine. It motivates without cheerleading. The addition of an exclamation point would not only add no value, it would flat-out ruin the line.
As with any rule of thumb, there are exceptions. Here are three examples that—in my opinion—justify the use of exclamation points:
Legitimate exceptions are extremely rare. Instead of trying to create the next one, just use some restraint. Don't use an exclamation point. I guarantee your marketing message will be stronger without it.
These are my thoughts on how businesses and organizations can create stronger marketing connections with their target audiences. I would love to hear yours.
Thanks for reading.
p.s. If you'd like to connect more strongly with your target audience, I'd love to help. Please message me at Todd@LINKTrainingAndConsulting.com, or call me at (513) 240-8383.